Ravindra K Kapoor Poet Rhyme

When the Joyride Stopped

NOTE: This poem somehow could not enter in the contest of Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver. How this has happened I have no idea. 
Ravindra K Kapoor


When the Joyride Stopped


Water in the mid stream was cool,
The scene was nice and refreshing,
Even our horses stopped to enjoy,
The beauty of the running stream.

Ravindra
Kanpur India 23rd Feb.2012

These lines are written and are
Based on the Picture of oil painting 
given by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver
and are submitted in honor of her 
Contest ‘A Lil' Bit of Aus...’

Inspired to write by the Poem of Andrea Dietrich

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John Freeman May 2, 2012 at 6:52 PM I love the poetic picture you've painted with your words, Ravindra. Thanks for stopping by and reading mine. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2012 at 12:13 PM RAVINDRA, the poem,, is wonderful... and the title says it all... a nice inspiration both of them ladies... it is always a great joy to find something different in your poem,page.. love the image you painted..always..pd

Elizabeth Wesley March 18, 2012 at 3:00 PM Always a joy to come back and read your words again. I can see those magnificent horses quenching their thirst. Luv, Elizabeth

Elizabeth Wesley March 3, 2012 at 5:42 PM Who could resist stopping to enjoy the lovely picture you give in your words of the stream. Just Lovely Ravi and I know you will do well in the contest! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2012 at 2:41 PM ultra amazing lines of beauty Ravindra my friend.. exquisite design of thoughts and much success in the contest luv.. mu husband is doing all my typing since my surgery last November on my hand and now more in March.. .. so late on commenting back to u ..sorry luv..

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2012 at 11:23 PM hey, how cool that my poem inspired this sweet write of YOURS. I love that title too. Much cooler than my boring title was!! Good luck in the contest, Ravindra.

Leo Larry Amadore February 22, 2012 at 10:08 PM Very thoughtful and calming, indeed...I enjoyed this a lot.

Don Munro February 22, 2012 at 9:33 PM I just stopped by to say how much I enjoyed this poem -- the simple beauty of it. I can picture the sun shining off the water.