When the Joyride Stopped

NOTE: This poem somehow could not enter in the contest of Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver. How this has happened I have no idea. Ravindra K Kapoor
When the Joyride Stopped Water in the mid stream was cool, The scene was nice and refreshing, Even our horses stopped to enjoy, The beauty of the running stream. Ravindra Kanpur India 23rd Feb.2012 These lines are written and are Based on the Picture of oil painting given by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver and are submitted in honor of her Contest ‘A Lil' Bit of Aus...’ Inspired to write by the Poem of Andrea Dietrich
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Date: 5/2/2012 6:52:00 PM
I love the poetic picture you've painted with your words, Ravindra. Thanks for stopping by and reading mine. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/25/2012 12:13:00 PM
RAVINDRA, the poem,, is wonderful... and the title says it all... a nice inspiration both of them ladies... it is always a great joy to find something different in your poem,page.. love the image you painted..always..pd
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Date: 3/18/2012 3:00:00 PM
Always a joy to come back and read your words again. I can see those magnificent horses quenching their thirst. Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 3/3/2012 5:42:00 PM
Who could resist stopping to enjoy the lovely picture you give in your words of the stream. Just Lovely Ravi and I know you will do well in the contest! :)
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Date: 2/26/2012 2:41:00 PM
ultra amazing lines of beauty Ravindra my friend.. exquisite design of thoughts and much success in the contest luv.. mu husband is doing all my typing since my surgery last November on my hand and now more in March.. .. so late on commenting back to u ..sorry luv..
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:23:00 PM
hey, how cool that my poem inspired this sweet write of YOURS. I love that title too. Much cooler than my boring title was!! Good luck in the contest, Ravindra.
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:08:00 PM
Very thoughtful and calming, indeed...I enjoyed this a lot.
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Date: 2/22/2012 9:33:00 PM
I just stopped by to say how much I enjoyed this poem -- the simple beauty of it. I can picture the sun shining off the water.
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