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When The House Sold

car shed weathered and worn thinks while empty vulnerable, anxious awaits news new truck?
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September 28, 2025 at 6:15 AM
Hopefully there will be another truck parked in there soon to ease the cars shed anxiety! Love this poem Sara…Debx
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Why, thank you, Deb. I am sure the shed is also worried about the possibility of repairs. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 5:13 PM
a personified Cinquain? An enjoyable read, Sara K...have a splendid fall evening, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 4:22 AM
Why not, mix it up a little? I wanted a simple five lined poem, so I went with Cinquain. Thanks for dropping by and the nice critique. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:20 AM
- Yes, it looks a little tired Sara... but it can be recycled into something useful :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 2:48 PM
Yes, old structures can be repaired and made of good use again. The same as old people. Thank you, Anne-Lise, for the visit and kind review. Sara K
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