When The Heaven's Bleed Iron

The sky has forgotten its mercy tonight,
And drips with a sorrow of steel—
No silver of stars, no whisper of light,
Only the wound we can feel.

The clouds are heavy with rusted rain,
They weep like a blade drawn thin,
Every drop is a quiet pain
That settles beneath the skin.

The wind does not sing as it used to sing,
It trembles, uncertain and cold—
As though it remembers a gentler spring
The heavens no longer hold.

Oh, where is the hush of a kinder blue,
The soft, forgiving air?
For iron has stained the evening through,
And grief is everywhere.

Yet still in the dark, though the sky may scar,
A heart dares quietly to start—
For even beneath the cruelest star,
There lingers a human heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 5:14 PM
so inspiring, I am glad for the turn this takes- it's deep
Reese Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 9:29 PM
Very nice rhyme and meter an excellent topic with very vivid imagery I would like to make a small suggestion. Starting a line with the word "and" adds nothing to the imagery it's simply a filler word it is certainly much better than most I see here.
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