Kishan Sharma Poet Rhyme

When the Heart Aches To Someone

When the heart aches to someone,
When love happens to someone.
and beating heart beats,
The mind does not seem to be a place.
How then do anybody live.?
When the disease of love comes in this.
If there is any,show the remedy.
How to explain someone?
The desive to live also,when you take us 
to the point of death.
Then how can somebody live?
When,heart is alive, this one of us,
just take a siege when someone takes it.

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 23, 2018 at 8:58 PM I've never heard of ghazal. I just know it's beautiful. Disease of love...don't think there is a cure. bbn Kishan Sharma February 23, 2018 at 9:31 PM Yes you are right dear bbn

Pashang Salehi February 23, 2018 at 7:42 PM My dear friend this is a beautiful poem, but it is not a ghazal.....The rhyming in Ghazal ends like aA bA cA dA eA etc. Kishan Sharma February 23, 2018 at 7:48 PM Thanks dear pashang for suggestion I will change this have a good day.