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When the Heart Aches To Someone

When the heart aches to someone, When love happens to someone. and beating heart beats, The mind does not seem to be a place. How then do anybody live.? When the disease of love comes in this. If there is any,show the remedy. How to explain someone? The desive to live also,when you take us to the point of death. Then how can somebody live? When,heart is alive, this one of us, just take a siege when someone takes it.

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Date: 2/23/2018 8:58:00 PM
I've never heard of ghazal. I just know it's beautiful. Disease of love...don't think there is a cure. bbn
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Kishan Sharma
Date: 2/23/2018 9:31:00 PM
Yes you are right dear bbn
Date: 2/23/2018 7:42:00 PM
My dear friend this is a beautiful poem, but it is not a ghazal.....The rhyming in Ghazal ends like aA bA cA dA eA etc.
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Kishan Sharma
Date: 2/23/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thanks dear pashang for suggestion I will change this have a good day.

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