When the Bottom Drops

It’s when out the bottom drops
that life falters, halts and stops.
All before is now lesser,
dreams slip into the never.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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April 22, 2026 at 4:19 AM
Thomas this was such a smart write! Well done and congratulations and you placement!
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