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When The Bottle Lets You Down

Can I ask a question of you my friend? Have you started drinking from the bottle again? You look so down it’s clear to see. What you really need is to be set free. The answer to your problems they won’t be found. Coming from that bottle you just put down. You don’t bend your elbow you bend your knees Trust me just once He’ll hear your pleas. You’re hurting so, I can feel your pain. There’s a way out, and it’s so very plain. I was where you’re at not long ago. But I had someone who wouldn’t let go. Now I want to be that someone that you can turn to. Help to guide your path and the things you do. Are you really proud of your life thus far? Drowning your sorrows in some dim lit bar. How many times were you too drunk to care? Well I can relate, yeah I’ve been there. You thought you lost it all, that’s just not true. If you trust in Jesus I guarantee you, He’ll lead you through. We all make excuses for the things we do. He’s heard every excuse there is a million times or two. Quit trying to blame Him, He didn’t put you there. You know I’m right, But you just don’t care. Listen little bud, you’re like a son to me. I care for you very much, I just want you to see. I know I led you wrong for many, many years. Now you’re carrying all my demons and most of my fears. I know you care for me a lot, that’s very plain to see. Now turn it over to Our Savior, let Him be the one to set you free.

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Date: 12/1/2014 9:37:00 AM
I had a fantastic read. I will really love to read more of your work....
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Date: 9/14/2014 10:20:00 AM
very inspirational I have someone that needs to read it feel it there is always hope beautifully prosed John Arribas
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