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When the Audience Falls Silent

act 1 At peak of rhetoric, grim emotions, tear drops build in blinking eyes with passion, on his knees stiletto to end it all, with his own guilty hands he would fall, a deathly silence greets the hall!! act 2 “Don’t go! please stay!” she bemoans, pleads with love, his stony heart yields not, he gives a shove, on the ground she falls in dust and sorrow, loses heart- for there is no tomorrow, grief greets silence in every row! act 3 the moment when truth is to be revealed, heart beats faster and every lip is sealed, she indeed is mother of orphaned child, life events unfold as by fate compiled! suppressed, quiet, but tears supplied! epilogue human nature to feel when pain bothers, we shed tears with suffering of others, interlinked we are in an unseen mesh, united in thought, divided in flesh, reason why audience goes hush!
Written 8/05/2021 10,10, 10, 10 8 syllables with aabbb rhyme Kai Michael Neumann sponsored When the Audience falls silent poetry contest,

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Date: 6/3/2021 7:28:00 AM
Brilliant! Congrats on your win, Krish!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/3/2021 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Seeker! Glad you visited and liked my poem!:)
Date: 5/16/2021 5:01:00 AM
WOW, Krish, I love this gem. What a great idea! It has everything for an audience to be hushed! Excellent entry for the contest. BW ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/16/2021 5:59:00 AM
Thanks Mala! I am glad you like it. Wanted to create the atmosphere of a live theatre!

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