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When Snow Came To Waltz

When Snow Came To Waltz Like animated dancing silhouettes Stilled in time— Caged on all sides by the chilling whiteness, We waited in frozen Hope. The sun had abandoned us, leaving Only a faint reflection; What could he do anyway? All Is like a maximum security of nature Lock down. Struggling with itself, the human spirit Grows—grows Wearily weird with wanton wrath— Warning unheeded. Bending knees cringed In once forgotten prayers—searching; Howling winds and chilled waxed ears listened. Void answers. Whispering fires wane and beg with hunger; but The wood cupboard has gone bare—and electricity? She ran away and hid in the bitter dark! As promised, blizzard waltz in and sat quietly. With stoic patience, she waited to dance and go her way. But our fuel dance cards had turned to cold ashes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/19/2016 9:37:00 PM
Tgis is an amazing write Millard. #7
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/21/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Connie Marcum Wong, I continue to look forward to your encouraging feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
Date: 2/14/2016 11:37:00 AM
Awesome.. brilliant writing..
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Date: 2/14/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thanks. May the embers of Peace and Love be with you. M. Lowe.
Date: 2/14/2016 10:29:00 AM
Congrat. Wonderful poem, indeed. I enjoyed especially the first and last stanza.. I also have an awkward attempt on similar theme, about ... Miss Winter, but mine is a very modest one. Thus I suppose we find some affinities.
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/14/2016 1:01:00 PM
Ovidiu, I am grateful for your read and feedback. I look forward to reading your "take" on this shared theme. Peace and Love, M. Lowe.
Date: 2/14/2016 8:54:00 AM
Brilliant piece, well crafted. In love with "Wearily weird with wanton wrath—" Sounds cool. Well done.
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/14/2016 12:59:00 PM
Celestine, thanks for your warm feedback. Peace, Love and Blessings be with you. M. Lowe
Date: 2/14/2016 6:52:00 AM
The poem is cool ;-) and it rings so true it's like I've just been through it myself. Good write
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Date: 2/14/2016 12:58:00 PM
Naive Poet, I thank you for the read and "cool" feedback. May the flames of Peace and Love continue to warm your being. Peace and Love, M. Lowe.
Date: 1/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Beautiful, well written poem
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Millard Lowe
Date: 1/26/2016 9:34:00 AM
Gail Underwood, I thank you for your read and feedback. It means a lot to me. Peace and Love. M. Lowe

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