When Snow Came To Waltz

When Snow Came To Waltz

Like animated dancing silhouettes
Stilled in time—
Caged on all sides by the chilling whiteness,
We waited in frozen
 Hope.

The sun had abandoned us, leaving
Only a faint reflection;
What could he do anyway?  All
Is like a maximum security of nature
Lock down.

Struggling with itself, the human spirit
Grows—grows 
Wearily weird with wanton wrath—
Warning unheeded.

Bending knees cringed
In once forgotten prayers—searching;
Howling winds and chilled waxed ears listened.
Void answers. 

Whispering fires wane and beg with hunger; but
The wood cupboard has gone bare—and electricity?
She ran away and hid in the bitter dark!

As promised, blizzard waltz in and sat quietly.
With stoic patience, she waited to dance and go her way.
But our fuel dance cards had turned to cold ashes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Tgis is an amazing write Millard. #7
Lowe Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Connie Marcum Wong, I continue to look forward to your encouraging feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
Saxena Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Awesome.. brilliant writing..
Lowe Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Thanks. May the embers of Peace and Love be with you. M. Lowe.
Bocsa Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Congrat. Wonderful poem, indeed. I enjoyed especially the first and last stanza.. I also have an awkward attempt on similar theme, about ... Miss Winter, but mine is a very modest one. Thus I suppose we find some affinities.
Lowe Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:01 PM
Ovidiu, I am grateful for your read and feedback. I look forward to reading your "take" on this shared theme. Peace and Love, M. Lowe.
Ikwuamaesi Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Brilliant piece, well crafted. In love with "Wearily weird with wanton wrath—" Sounds cool. Well done.
Lowe Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Celestine, thanks for your warm feedback. Peace, Love and Blessings be with you. M. Lowe
Poet Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 6:52 AM
The poem is cool ;-) and it rings so true it's like I've just been through it myself. Good write
Lowe Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Naive Poet, I thank you for the read and "cool" feedback. May the flames of Peace and Love continue to warm your being. Peace and Love, M. Lowe.
Underwood Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Beautiful, well written poem
Lowe Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Gail Underwood, I thank you for your read and feedback. It means a lot to me. Peace and Love. M. Lowe
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