Danang Tyasworo Poet Elegiac Lyric

When She Said Don'T Come To Me Again

When she said don't come to me again
Kind of fool like him turned such a pale
Like the moon don't breathe the heat of sun
All the grounds became up side down

Then she signed don't cross the river
Kind a fool like him 's just shiverin'
Wondering if that's mere illusion 
pouring more these coldest day

Don't chase the heat by the rain
Something really out of hold
Just keep on wanderin' to where highest gardens shine
With her true love in the end

When highest sky turning down
Every secret's just too clear
Like every eye's seen
Why all falling leaves still there
No fuzzy to trace the fool

When you say don't come to me again
Splendor face of yours chills memory
Like the moon breezin' with sparkling stars
So dreamy oh I don't know why it's so beautiful

Like the moon breezin' with sparkling stars
So dreamy oh I don't know why it's so beautiful
Don't know why it's so beautiful

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Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2015 at 3:30 AM - Hello Danang :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Danang Tyasworo October 22, 2015 at 6:52 AM Hi Anne :) you're definitely true about the autumn, while poets in equator here commonly adore twilight as much as you adore autumn :) Much appreciate with your lovely greetings. Wishing you very best - hugs, Dan :)

Skat A October 18, 2015 at 4:29 PM Hi Danang, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Danang Tyasworo October 18, 2015 at 5:01 PM Lovely greetings dear SKAT, thank you for your kind words and being my friend. I'll certainly go to your page right away..

Danang Tyasworo October 18, 2015 at 4:28 PM Hi LINDA, thank you and me too lucky to have you and friends here. That's lyrics of my song at soundcloud : https://soundcloud.com/dana-citizen-of-saturn. I hope I can write poems as well next time... Cheers

Poet Destroyer A October 18, 2015 at 2:38 PM Danang, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@