When Our Hearts Meet

So far
Beyond the sea
Over the horizon
Where I cannot see
From here
For my eyes
Are not able to see
Passed the point
Where sky and ocean meet
Not free.

Yet my heart
Is able to see
Over the horizon
Beyond the sea
From here
With my mind's eye
The distance disappear
When you and I join,
Beyond where sky and ocean meet
Our hearts free.


By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 07.28.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:17 PM
Very picturesque take on love (: enjoyed this one ~~Alex(:
Rhinem Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 12:24 AM
Smile ~ This is very beautiful dear lady; for it tells the tales of olden times when, love was born across the lands and shores, long before, there were airplanes and telephones and computer screens and so forth; actually, some of histories greatest love stories were written, beyond the horizons of sight and, deep within the heart and soul; "Love" ~ Smile, "Thank You" for stopping by; it was a joy to see You ~ "Beautiful Poem Dear Lady" ~ "Love & Warmth Always," John!:) ~
Byrne Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Very heart-warming Caroline!
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 5:57 PM
Very nice and interesting way to express this kind of love, Caroline. I enjoyed this. Luv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Soft and lovely Caroline.. lilting words paint a scene in poetry... appreciate your sentiments on my expressions in free verse for my Ron... they just came out this way late last night... guess LUV will do that to ya... appreciate your welcome comments .. dear friend.. with luv..
Del Fierro Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 11:44 AM
isn't it amazing,that sense of awareness,which transcends time and space,even beyond our limited view of an event horizon...i call it the 25th hour :) ......nice....peace , jay
Neels Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Caroline, this is such a beautiful write... thank you for taking the time out to read my work as well.. -- Wilma
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July 28, 2010 at 11:10 AM
BEAUTIFUL WRITE, ENJOYED -SKAT
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