When Our Hearts Meet

So far
Beyond the sea
Over the horizon
Where I cannot see
From here
For my eyes
Are not able to see
Passed the point
Where sky and ocean meet
Not free.

Yet my heart
Is able to see
Over the horizon
Beyond the sea
From here
With my mind's eye
The distance disappear
When you and I join,
Beyond where sky and ocean meet
Our hearts free.


By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 07.28.10

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Alex Brown

Date: 7/29/2010 4:17:00 PM

Very picturesque take on love (: enjoyed this one ~~Alex(:

John Rhinem

Date: 7/29/2010 12:24:00 AM

Smile ~ This is very beautiful dear lady; for it tells the tales of olden times when, love was born across the lands and shores, long before, there were airplanes and telephones and computer screens and so forth; actually, some of histories greatest love stories were written, beyond the horizons of sight and, deep within the heart and soul; "Love" ~ Smile, "Thank You" for stopping by; it was a joy to see You ~ "Beautiful Poem Dear Lady" ~ "Love & Warmth Always," John!:) ~

David Byrne

Date: 7/28/2010 6:06:00 PM

Very heart-warming Caroline!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2010 5:57:00 PM

Very nice and interesting way to express this kind of love, Caroline. I enjoyed this. Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/28/2010 12:00:00 PM

Soft and lovely Caroline.. lilting words paint a scene in poetry... appreciate your sentiments on my expressions in free verse for my Ron... they just came out this way late last night... guess LUV will do that to ya... appreciate your welcome comments .. dear friend.. with luv..

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 7/28/2010 11:44:00 AM

isn't it amazing,that sense of awareness,which transcends time and space,even beyond our limited view of an event horizon...i call it the 25th hour :) ......nice....peace , jay