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When None Command

When None Command By surging sea and force of wind A tattered vessel floundered in Where coral reef performed the rest In ripping wide her wooden breast. From timber scream to cracking mast Her form dismembered to the last And on the waves her pieces reached An aftermath of slumber, beached. She is a silent reprimand To those who sail When none command.

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Date: 9/21/2020 4:10:00 PM
WOW.....this is really a gripping write Janice..just happened to be browsing the home page and found it. I also find those last three lines a metaphoric reprimand for us all....
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Date: 2/2/2018 5:41:00 PM
Very deep Janice, love those last three lines...
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Janice Thompson
Date: 2/3/2018 2:50:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One!
Date: 2/2/2018 8:16:00 AM
I think this is an excellent poem, Janis. I have read several this morning and so far I like this one the best.
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Janice Thompson
Date: 2/3/2018 2:49:00 AM
Wow! Thank you so much, Daniel!

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