When Nature Complies


I thought I’d have to leave my favored spot
and go inside this warm and humid day.
My pleas for respite must have been perceived,
for Nature sent a soothing breeze my way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Radice Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 5:29 AM
A lovely poem Janice that in its four short lines conjured up such wonderful imagery. Cheers - Gary
Canerdy Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Thanks SO much, Gary. Janice
Pandit Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 5:30 AM
A moment of bliss beautifully captured, Janice. Nature delivered and so did you.
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Thank you for this wonderful response, Vijay. Janice
Rodgers Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 6:04 PM
Dear, Janice, what a wonderful and comforting poem. It was like I felt that breeze. - Blessings, Daniel
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 6:13 AM
What a lovely response! Thanks so much, Daniel. Janice
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February 2, 2024 at 10:47 AM
How lovely...
Canerdy Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Thanks so much, S.O.! Janice
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