When My Life Changed

For: when my life changed Poetry Contest   Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann   August 13, 2025

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a Curtal Sonnet My life changed when suddenly Mom grew old, the years had passed I was aware, too soon the sunny afternoon became the dark shadow of impending coil's mortal cold journey underworld to the banks of gloom~ the ferryman will bid you to his barque. Dont go! I cannot bear to be alone, precious time has slipped away, left me stark and naked in the darkess of new moon, how soon for selfish sins must I atone? Momma, disembark!

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Date: 8/13/2025 5:20:00 PM
I can relate to your poem and the feelings within your lines. A fabulous contest entry, so poignant and filled with deep emotions. Well done!
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