Chetta Achara Poet Other

When My Life Changed

For: when my life changed Poetry Contest   Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann   August 13, 2025

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 a Curtal Sonnet 

My life changed when suddenly Mom grew old,
the years had passed I was aware, too soon
the sunny afternoon became the dark
shadow of impending coil's mortal cold
journey underworld to the banks of gloom~
the ferryman will bid you to his barque.

Dont go! I cannot bear to be alone,
precious time has slipped away, left me stark
and naked in the darkess of new moon,
how soon for selfish sins must I atone?
Momma, disembark!

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sara Etgen-Baker August 13, 2025 at 5:20 PM I can relate to your poem and the feelings within your lines. A fabulous contest entry, so poignant and filled with deep emotions. Well done!