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When My Heart Broke

When my heart broke, From me the light was stolen, With the love that filled my heart, I walked eyes closed, Because I believed in love, as they say love is blind So was I So was I walking, walking blind for I believed in what I felt, The feeling of my breaking heart opened my eyes, Into new world I found myself, the world of fear and dishonesty For the love that fought my fears had now betrayed me I've never known beauty, I knew how it felt From the paradise I dwelled, walking without fear of stumbling, I now could not believe my wide open eyes, for now love taught me fear, When my heart broke, I lost hope faith that it ever existed, For then I knew that my heart betrayed me, should I have known

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Date: 2/7/2025 5:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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