When My Breath and Yours Came Together

For there in eternal passion
Our souls hath stood 
And a new life sprung to its genesis
Beyond what any nemesis can break to pieces
When my breath and yours came together
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Capitano Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 7:45 AM
Love the image of mingling breath. Namaste.
Sage Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 5:17 AM
Namaste Phil, aap kaisey hain? the love that springs to life when the breath mingles supersedes any else, next to it is the love that springs when the eyes stare into each other...thanks for the comment, apna khayal rhakna.
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