For: Repetition Works When Done Right poetry contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
January 5, 2026
When Moon weeps tears of frost fallen from legends older than we remember, when Sun warmed the bones of our elders and watched young ones play in grassland fields, then Sky rebelled and Stars fell to us, in Darkness old bones still remember and tell the stories of our elders before their tears of frost when Moon weeps.
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