(Entry for the Repetition Works When Done Right Poetry Contest, sponsor: Nette Onclaud, submitted January 4, 2026)
When distant Sun rages, when Moon weeps, they've seen beautiful Gaia sputter, Mother Nature abhorring changes inflicted by careless humanoids. The surrounding celestial orbs gape with wild wonder, with confusion, uncomprehending the dying sight when helpless Sun rages, when Moon weeps.
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.