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When Lust Disappear

When lust disappear The heart becomes an ocean having water clear

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 9/24/2019 5:04:00 AM

Short poem with a ton of knowledge to remember. I love haiku. Ernilando

Nuzhat Shireen
Date: 9/28/2019 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, for liking my poem. It means lot to me.

Mark Toney

Date: 9/10/2019 10:18:00 AM

The lust-free heart can open wide to all, promoting peace and harmony like the waves of the sea. Excellent metaphor, Nuzhat. ~Mark

Nuzhat Shireen
Date: 9/10/2019 3:07:00 PM

Yours words are pearls, able to keep in heart, having a great price

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/28/2019 9:04:00 AM

Chrystal clear water...lust is over...Nice imagery

Nuzhat Shireen
Date: 8/28/2019 11:19:00 AM

Thank you, for comments.