When Lust Disappear

When lust disappear
The heart becomes an ocean 
having water clear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Tugaff Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 5:04 AM
Short poem with a ton of knowledge to remember. I love haiku. Ernilando
Shireen Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, for liking my poem. It means lot to me.
Toney Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 10:18 AM
The lust-free heart can open wide to all, promoting peace and harmony like the waves of the sea. Excellent metaphor, Nuzhat. ~Mark
Shireen Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Yours words are pearls, able to keep in heart, having a great price
Michael Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 9:04 AM
Chrystal clear water...lust is over...Nice imagery
Shireen Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Thank you, for comments.
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