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When Love Goes Away

When Love Goes Away,
Tears fall,
Hearts break,
Smiles turn to frowns,
Love stops,
She drops,
Her life fades away,
Her heart stops,
Life goes away.

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Brittany Moon

March 18, 2010 at 1:02 PM

Going to my favs...God Bless...-Brittany-

Brittany Moon

March 18, 2010 at 8:18 AM

Congrats on your featured poem...i like this poem, it has a lot of meaing behind the words you wrote...God Bless, and keep writing...-Brittany-

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 17, 2010 at 6:51 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Emily. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

March 15, 2010 at 4:01 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured in this week..I get the feeling of much anguish..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Ernilando Tugaff

March 14, 2010 at 11:49 PM

You are absolutely right! Congratulations though, on your featured poem. Happen what may....life must go on. Ernilando

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 14, 2010 at 6:17 PM

Congrats Emily on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. such an excellent write and I must make it a new favorite of mine tonight... happy for u..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..