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When Love Goes Away

When Love Goes Away, Tears fall, Hearts break, Smiles turn to frowns, Love stops, She drops, Her life fades away, Her heart stops, Life goes away.

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Brittany Moon

Date: 3/18/2010 1:02:00 PM

Going to my favs...God Bless...-Brittany-

Brittany Moon

Date: 3/18/2010 8:18:00 AM

Congrats on your featured poem...i like this poem, it has a lot of meaing behind the words you wrote...God Bless, and keep writing...-Brittany-

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/17/2010 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Emily. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2010 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured in this week..I get the feeling of much anguish..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/14/2010 11:49:00 PM

You are absolutely right! Congratulations though, on your featured poem. Happen what may....life must go on. Ernilando

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2010 6:17:00 PM

Congrats Emily on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. such an excellent write and I must make it a new favorite of mine tonight... happy for u..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Adrian Torbenson

Date: 3/5/2010 8:19:00 AM

sad but strong the emtions in this poem to me are deep i could feel maybe some of what you felt like when writting this good job keep it up

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/20/2010 6:32:00 PM

a very sad poem... strange emotions well up inside when i read this. feeling that words cannot describe. ------Ell