Anoucheka Gangabissoon Poet Rhyme

When Life Is Seen In Nines

The sun shone bright and the wind was cool

On the road to that place, I was ecstatic

Expecting the nine of all that life can drool

Now and then I did dream of  a picnic

With my host, the prince charming of my dreams

Laughing in love was no more made of whims

Never did I see behind this facade of falsity

Love turned instantly to what is known as cruelty

Into a slave he made me, of craving liberty!


Anoucheka Gangabissoon
For the contest Nine
Sponsored by Tracie Indigo Dreamweaver

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Ralph Taylor January 20, 2013 at 5:39 PM Congrats on your win, Anoucheka - Ralph

Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 12:56 PM Congratulations on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 20, 2013 at 11:34 AM Congratulations on your top spot Anoucheka luv xx

Poet Destroyer A January 20, 2013 at 10:02 AM Anoucheka Gangabissoon , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

Len Gasun January 19, 2013 at 7:26 PM Congratulations on your big win my dear Anoucheka! love/hugs, Leonora

Debra Squyres January 11, 2013 at 11:30 AM Wow !! You really wrote a beautiful poem within the parameters of the contest. Deep and moving !! I had a ten once...miss him dearly. He never tried to limit my liberty...and never showed me cruelty. Love and light !! Anoucheka Gangabissoon January 12, 2013 at 5:15 AM Thkie :)