When Life Is Seen In Nines

The sun shone bright and the wind was cool On the road to that place, I was ecstatic Expecting the nine of all that life can drool Now and then I did dream of a picnic With my host, the prince charming of my dreams Laughing in love was no more made of whims Never did I see behind this facade of falsity Love turned instantly to what is known as cruelty Into a slave he made me, of craving liberty! Anoucheka Gangabissoon For the contest Nine Sponsored by Tracie Indigo Dreamweaver

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/20/2013 5:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Anoucheka - Ralph

Christopher Bunton

Date: 1/20/2013 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/20/2013 11:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your top spot Anoucheka luv xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2013 10:02:00 AM

Anoucheka Gangabissoon , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 1/19/2013 7:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win my dear Anoucheka! love/hugs, Leonora

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/11/2013 11:30:00 AM

Wow !! You really wrote a beautiful poem within the parameters of the contest. Deep and moving !! I had a ten once...miss him dearly. He never tried to limit my liberty...and never showed me cruelty. Love and light !!

Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 1/12/2013 5:15:00 AM

Thkie :)