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When It Rains, It Pours

“When it rains, it pours” Often turns out true For one thing gone wrong Sometimes starts a slew. So an E.R. trip, Which would be enough, Then a tire near flat Leads to other stuff. Like no transport home From a birthday meet, Since the E.R. car Had the booster seat. Frantic texts and calls ‘Til things got resolved, But the story then Gets much more involved. ‘Cross the ocean, flights Somehow got delayed. Then a phone got lost, Leaving all dismayed. But the downpour stops And the sun comes out. All the ups and downs Are what life’s about.

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Date: 6/18/2022 7:39:00 PM
What in the world is an ER Car? I doubt if I can sleep tonight Ilene, and it is your fault.
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Date: 6/6/2022 10:31:00 AM
When it pours, I think about US Army paratroopers camping for days in flood waters because a U-2 blocking the runway could not take off. Do or die, that sun sure feels good after a storm! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 6/6/2022 10:20:00 AM
The poem is just wonderful. That's how life is. Very true.
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Date: 6/5/2022 6:53:00 PM
So true, Ilene, and always, it seems, the best is yet to come...the sunshine after the rain, sometimes accompanied by a rainbow of promise.
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Date: 6/5/2022 4:43:00 PM
You mean… there’s meant to be ups? Ha ha… like your attitude Ilene. Kind of follow the same philosophy myself. Terry
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