When It Rains, It Pours

“When it rains, it pours”
Often turns out true 
For one thing gone wrong 
Sometimes starts a slew.

So an E.R. trip,
Which would be enough,
Then a tire near flat
Leads to other stuff.

Like no transport home
From a birthday meet,
Since the E.R. car
Had the booster seat.

Frantic texts and calls
‘Til things got resolved,
But the story then
Gets much more involved.

‘Cross the ocean, flights
Somehow got delayed.
Then a phone got lost,
Leaving all dismayed.

But the downpour stops
And the sun comes out.
All the ups and downs
Are what life’s about.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 7:39 PM
What in the world is an ER Car? I doubt if I can sleep tonight Ilene, and it is your fault.
Leffanta Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 10:31 AM
When it pours, I think about US Army paratroopers camping for days in flood waters because a U-2 blocking the runway could not take off. Do or die, that sun sure feels good after a storm! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Vangaveti Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 10:20 AM
The poem is just wonderful. That's how life is. Very true.
Hankins Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 6:53 PM
So true, Ilene, and always, it seems, the best is yet to come...the sunshine after the rain, sometimes accompanied by a rainbow of promise.
Flood Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 4:43 PM
You mean… there’s meant to be ups? Ha ha… like your attitude Ilene. Kind of follow the same philosophy myself. Terry
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