When It Rains

Sometimes you can't tell it's raining
until you see the puddle
Drops floating, cascading down to earth
so seemingly subtle

But far from dainty are these drops 
displacers of dirt and dry 
Each shatters like a nuclear bomb
cast downward from the sky

The wreckage of which is washed away
absorbed into the ocean
The waves are drops fighting for life
drowned by undulate motion

Unable to resist polar attraction
In appearance, simple and small
This complex network of H and O
becomes bigger than us all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ramos Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 8:18 PM
"Bigger than us all" The universal law Eternal - whole Giving - taking Mending - breaking Contradicting paradox. Thanks Emma for your inspirational work. Ruben
Walker Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Aww..the poetry of earth science :) beautiful.
Cooke Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:33 PM
good observation on rain, described by a poets voice, i like this
Anonymous Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Nice compliment from such a talented poet!! Thank you
Ratliff Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:07 PM
very elegantly told,nice work.
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