When It All Began

You look at me 
And I wonder if you see what I see
All the flaws and imperfections
I wonder why I'm the choice of your affection 

But then again apparently 
Your no good for me 

But i love you
So what's my choice 
Besides id rather listen to my hearts voice  

You hold my hand and my heart 
As i think of how are love came to a start

Me looking for an escape 
From the pain and memories that haunted me 

And you knew it to 
"You walk with the pain on your shoulders"
And suddenly you seemed so much older

You knew and cared back then 
You weren't even my friend 

And i found out 
You loved me that day too
And thought if only you knew  

I hope that 
you my friend 
know my love will never end 
because I knew when it all began
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bono Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Very nicely done.Thank you for your comments.Hope all is well.
Dufresne Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 6:14 AM
Ariel, lovely poem about your love. Thank you for your comment. Robert
Bono Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 9:26 PM
nicely said.Thank you for the comment.I am glad you liked it.
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