Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

When I'M Feeling Blue

When I’m feeling blue,
                                                  I look at the picture of you,
                                                        Smiling back at me,
                                                  It changes my mood easily.

                                                    When I’m feeling blue,
                                               I write a poem about a view,
                                              Describing a beautiful scenery,
                                             My heart is satisfied and happy.

                                                   When I’m feeling blue,
                                                   I eat my food so slow,
                                             But when I finished my meal,
                                            My problems is not a big deal.


                                                    November 16, 2013

               For SKAT's BLUE-feeling blue or color blue (old/new poem) Contest
                                                      5th Place Winner

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Olusegun Arowolo January 19, 2014 at 10:50 AM Wonderful and interesting piece,Maria...Congrats on your win...

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2014 at 6:43 PM nice one, Maria. Congratulations for your win.

Harry Horsman November 22, 2013 at 11:39 AM lovely positive poetry

Nette Onclaud November 17, 2013 at 11:47 AM ohh, so poignantly expressed... i hope this is not really happening, paz.. your poetry shines today; so well done!...:) huggs

Len Gasun November 17, 2013 at 9:48 AM An excellently sweet poem this is my dear friend Maria. I hope you're not feeling blue today and your appetite is good. Biggest hugs to you from me on this very beautiful and wonderful write. Good luck in the contest my dear friend. TYSM for sharing & your inspiring/ congratulatory comments on my poems. love much, Leonora

Ravi Sathasivam November 17, 2013 at 5:08 AM Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2013 at 1:35 AM I like how well you portrayed feeling blue. Good entry for PD.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2013 at 1:43 PM A touching and sad poem Maria. - Hope you are not feeling blue today. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)