When I Was Your Lover and You Were My Love

When I was your lover I was a volcano
Throwing out light and life like lava
When you were my love you gave
Me that energy to burn
Sparkling fizzing and crackling alive.

When I was your lover I was a red pine tree
Standing at its height tall and lean
When you were my love you made
Me stand fully tall
Straight and proud relishing my height.

When I was your lover I was Saville Row
A sense of style and well turned out
When you were my love you relished
My look, my style
The cut of my job feeling razor sharp.

When I was your lover I was the dawn
Of your day, your rising sun
When you were my love the first
Thought of your day, I
Filled the space between sleeping and waking.

When I was your lover I was the dusk
Of your day, your setting sun
When you were my love, the last 
Thought of your day, I 
Filled the space between awake and sleep.

When I was your lover I was with you 
At night in your sleeping thoughts
When you were my love you brought
Me into your dreams
Keeping me alive and loved as you slept.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 12:05 PM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
Chircop Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Welcome to PS , Jane Allen. What a beautiful poem, I so love the last stanza most of all your wonderful lines..: ) Charma.
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July 30, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Quite beautiful, Jane, good poem! the reader takes these lines and personalizes them...nice effect....jimbo
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