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When I Wake

I look for you when I wake I feel anxiety when you are gone disappointed is my heart you were not here all along I search for you about I see you in others I feel empty without I envy all those lovers Emptiness is so numbing it takes away all hope I dream of letting go to undo the pain I show

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Date: 9/10/2010 10:39:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your stay here is a long one.. check out the contest scene .. enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 1:22:00 AM
simple n i like
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:15:00 PM
Nice thoughts well expressed On when I awake, naomi
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:00:00 PM
Nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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