When I See Your Face... (End Line Word)

No one knows why, where or . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . When
Our time to pass will come, but heed the words . . . . . . . . . . I
Need to say, because it is important that you . . . . . . . . . . . . See
How much you mean to me. That when I see  . . . . . . . . . . . your  	
Face I know how much I mean to you in the smile upon your . . .Face
It is God who put you on my path so that I may grow and . . . I
Thank Him, for you have made a difference. So please . . . . . See
that the words you say, the things you do toward . . . . . . . . . the
People that you know, affect their mind and heart. Your. . . . . face
they won't be able to forget. Waste not your time with gains . . of
power and treat the people that you meet as if you would . . . . . . God.


By CarolineCecile
Copyright © 02.14.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 7, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Dear Caroline Cecile, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit Superb Quill on a new form of Poetry. I would like to try bringing the "End Line Word" form to POETRYSOUP again. I want YOUR permission to use this POETIC Tapestry as an example to the SOUP Editors; I will add it in the letter I want to write to the soup. I have not talked to Dane Ann yet. Maybe YOU feel better with her Thank-YOU LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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March 11, 2010 at 8:58 AM
btw. part 4 is here. I hope that you enjoy. :)
Sebastian Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Congrats. A very nice write. I enjoyed reading this. Very inspirational. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:42 PM
Caroline , congratulations, You did very well with this one!
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Excellent consept line. The Golden Rule! Combined with Be Impeccable with your words. I'm working on these concepts daily!
Anderson Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Hey, Caroline, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post these comments for me....Jimmy
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March 2, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest Caroline. Love, Carol
Esquire Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Dear Caroline, Sincere Congratulations on this Expertly Done " End Line Word " POEM Winning In Dane Ann's Contest YOU have grasped the Essence of the Form Excellent Thank-YOU for YOUR Support and Participation In Dane and My Endeavor to Create this New Form Again Congrats YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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March 2, 2010 at 12:25 AM
Happy to see this in the winners list, Caroline. My congratulations to deserving win. (^_^) Noel.
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March 1, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Caroline, I must have been distracted!! I missed so many wonderful writes! My warm congratulations to you on this fantastic write and winning! A worthy win, truly! I thank you for reading and leaving those kind comments for me, my dear friend. Peace, love, audrey
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March 1, 2010 at 7:54 PM
congrats!
Freeman Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Congratulation on #3 Caroline. Awesome job first time ever end line. Agape, Moses
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March 1, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations Caroline, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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March 1, 2010 at 4:41 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on placing third in Dane Ann's contest to my other comment. This is such an uplifting poem. Enjoy your well deserved honor. Karen
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March 1, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Congratulations on your win...beautiful poem...Marty
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March 1, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Congrats Caroline on your winning poem and placement in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a wonderful victory ..for a marvelous write .. a magnificent message from your gifted pen.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 20, 2010 at 10:45 PM
Just like a song chorused heartily with that someone. Brilliant work, Caroline. Goodluck! and thank you for droping by and leaving comment to my end line word. (^_^) Noel.
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February 18, 2010 at 10:14 PM
beautifully worded and written,,good luck in the contest as if you are going to need luck since this indeed perfection in so many ways,,,Thank you for always reading my words and leaving a piece of your heart and mind upon mine,,,Blessings..Cecil
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February 18, 2010 at 9:30 PM
Dear Caroline, My Dear Young Lady ONE Word which really doesn't Convey how PERFECTthis " End Line Word" Form is " W O W " I do hope YOU have Entered this in Dane Ann's CONTEST " END LINE WORD " I THANK-YOU very much for YOUR interest in this Form and for supporting Dane and I in our Endeavor to Establish this Form as a TRUE Form of POETRY I have to say SOUP MAIL CALL, YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG I type real sloiw so wait 10 minutes Thank-YOU ALWAYS...HG
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February 18, 2010 at 1:08 PM
What a nice faith message. HG and Dane will enjoy this too. What a nice tribute to them and their new form. Keep that faith shining. If you entered the contest, best wishes. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good day! Karen
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February 17, 2010 at 5:30 PM
A beauty,,indeed is..Charma
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February 17, 2010 at 3:19 PM
this must be about a special person indeed to inspire you to think so highly of them!! Good luck in the contest,Caroline. Luv, Andrea
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February 15, 2010 at 8:09 AM
Oh yes....this is beautiful, Caroline! A wonderful piece for the contest! ~ Carrie
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