When I New

It seems like a world away
When we met on that hot summer day
To me it was just plain to see
That you should be with me
When you turned and looked my way
I could almost hear you say
You felt the same way too
And that's when I knew
all i needed was you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/26/2009 6:17:00 PM
Awesome poem, God bless, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/26/2009 11:03:00 AM
with God all things are possibe, a beautiful write whick spoke to my heart and how me and josh feel that every single day, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/26/2009 11:02:00 AM
aww so great I like this poem so much, this is so true I believe in love at first sight, it happened with me and Josh my husband, we met in december 2007 and we got married in april 2008 just four months of meeting but when we met the Lord just made us click in a big way, it wasn't liek a whirl wind romance God sent us a huracine which swept us both clean off our feet, we have been marred 16 months and have been together 2 years in december so this poem means a lot to me, cont...
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