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When I Look At You

When I look at you, I remember our First kiss, out first hug, The first time you looked at me. When I look at you my heart Beats a million miles an hour, When you look at me My heart races uncontrollably, And it skips beats. When I look at you, My heart finds it's home. You know they said, "Home is where the heart is." I LOVE YOU BABY!! Always~N~Forever, Briana Lynn

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Date: 3/7/2013 3:23:00 AM
Briana a very good romantic write...David
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Date: 3/6/2013 11:54:00 PM
Nice work Briana, on the third line, I think you meant our: keep your creative pen flowing...Raul
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Date: 3/6/2013 11:14:00 PM
Nice work on this romantic haiku.
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