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WHEN I HAVE ZERO DAYS

when i have zero days the last pillow of earth and coldness fills the hearth everything goes sideways my breath can’t move a match my lover listens close heart’s beating like a rose i can hear heaven’s latch when i have zero hours and tears are held at bay as kin, in whispers pray the silent tone devours when i’ve zero seconds i see the light at last my destination cast as the good Lord beckons 4/8/2022 Not for contest

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Date: 4/12/2022 10:35:00 PM
"i see the light at last" Nice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. I had my mom in mind as I wrote this. Tomorrow…it will be one year. ~ hugs
Date: 4/9/2022 2:00:00 AM
We all have these feelings sometimes. Living alone makes things worse. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 4:30:00 AM
A big hug, dear one!
Date: 4/8/2022 10:23:00 PM
Loveliness at its best! A fav for me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, JCB
Date: 4/8/2022 7:13:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts on love's final embrace. Have a nice evening, Evelyn :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2022 7:53:00 PM
Thank you! Have a wonderful weekend! <3
Date: 4/8/2022 6:47:00 PM
Superb
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2022 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Jeff!