When I Have Zero Days

when i have zero days the last pillow of earth and coldness fills the hearth everything goes sideways my breath can’t move a match my lover listens close heart’s beating like a rose i can hear heaven’s latch when i have zero hours and tears are held at bay as kin, in whispers pray the silent tone devours when i’ve zero seconds i see the light at last my destination cast as the good Lord beckons 4/8/2022 Not for contest
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Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 10:35 PM
"i see the light at last" Nice.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 4:29 AM
Thank you, Caren. I had my mom in mind as I wrote this. Tomorrow…it will be one year. ~ hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 2:00 AM
We all have these feelings sometimes. Living alone makes things worse. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 4:30 AM
A big hug, dear one!
Brul Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 10:23 PM
Loveliness at its best! A fav for me!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 4:30 AM
Thank you, JCB
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 7:13 PM
Beautiful thoughts on love's final embrace. Have a nice evening, Evelyn :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 7:53 PM
Thank you! Have a wonderful weekend! <3
Kyser Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 6:47 PM
Superb
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Jeff!
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