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When I Go Deep Down

When I go deep down to find a cause behind I find nothing but a Seeker and a causeless causer This earth is round with which are so bound Everything revolves around like the circles of the smoker Roaming around the world being a globe trotter Everybody seems to be a part of same story of the same writer Running to be a better climbing the success ladder But valley on the sides becomes deeper and deeper Tried being a friend a healer and a lover But the distance always became more longer and longer There was no start and there will not be any end The show will always be on with the smiling Joker Nobody will be escaped either king or a beggar All will float in peace sooner or a later

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 7:34:00 PM
Archana, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 9/12/2013 5:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:13:00 PM
Hi Archana, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Archana Sonar
Date: 9/2/2013 12:44:00 AM
Thank you Skat for your appriciation :) I am a very small being in this world and work as a Technical Leader (IT) in Mubai, India. Just a two months before I started writing poems and found this beautiful site to post the same. Thank You once again :)
Date: 9/1/2013 5:19:00 AM
Beautifully rhymed one,
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:40:00 PM
Nicely crafted work Archana. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:17:00 AM
A very good write... .Nobody will be escape either king or a beggar All will float in peace sooner or a later... Great lines and i loved it.Good luck
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:10:00 AM
Archana , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/31/2013 3:46:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Archana ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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