Archana Sonar Poet Rhyme

When I Go Deep Down

When I go deep down
to find a cause behind
I find nothing but a Seeker
and a causeless causer
 
This earth is round 
with which are so bound
Everything  revolves around
like the circles of the smoker
 
Roaming around the world
being a globe trotter
Everybody seems to be a part of 
same story of the same writer
 
Running to be a better
climbing the success ladder
But valley on the sides
becomes deeper and deeper
 
Tried being a friend
a healer and a lover
But the distance always became
more longer and longer
 
There was no start
and there will not be any end
The show will always be on
with the smiling Joker
 
Nobody will be escaped
either king or a beggar
All will float in peace
sooner or a later

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Poet Destroyer A September 14, 2013 at 7:34 PM Archana, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu September 12, 2013 at 5:13 AM I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing.

Skat A September 1, 2013 at 1:13 PM Hi Archana, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * Archana Sonar September 2, 2013 at 12:44 AM Thank you Skat for your appriciation :) I am a very small being in this world and work as a Technical Leader (IT) in Mubai, India. Just a two months before I started writing poems and found this beautiful site to post the same. Thank You once again :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 1, 2013 at 5:19 AM Beautifully rhymed one,

Mustapha Mohammed August 31, 2013 at 5:40 PM Nicely crafted work Archana. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Litan Dey August 31, 2013 at 9:17 AM A very good write... .Nobody will be escape either king or a beggar All will float in peace sooner or a later... Great lines and i loved it.Good luck

Poet Destroyer A August 31, 2013 at 5:10 AM Archana , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2013 at 3:46 AM Welcome to P-Soup, Archana ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)