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When I Feel You

When i feel you under my body my pupils dilate my arteries conscrit... You make me rise temperature. my heart skips a beat and races... My blood pressure skyrocket. You take my breath, my respiration becomes shallow and rapid. You impulsate my brain, put fire and burns me in electrical vibes.... Secretions spit out and i have no control of my glands... You cause me spasms pressing my muscles, tensing my body that i feel i could lift tremendous weights... I feel violent, ugly, messy... But as a miracle all in love way... I am grateful for all incredible feeling i carry inside when with you... !

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Date: 11/28/2019 4:14:00 AM
Thanks dear friends Jeff and Darlene, i am not back yet, i hope in december rewrite poems for you all palls... salute alkas
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Date: 11/25/2019 4:38:00 PM
Howdy Alkas. Passion is greatly worded here. Violent is also a part of the heart. Thanks Alkas. I'm looking forward to reading more. Glad to see you're back amigo.
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 11/28/2019 4:12:00 AM
Deat Jeff not back yet, i hope in december, salute and thanks alkas
Date: 11/25/2019 4:30:00 PM
Hello Alka Poetry, your back!You really expressed yourself here in this poem. I hope you are well. Have a nice evening my friend. Salute Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/4/2019 1:49:00 PM
Okay Alkas Poetry, Bye for now. Salute Darlene
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 11/28/2019 4:19:00 AM
DEAR DARLING DARLENE , THANKS I AM NOT BACK YET, MAYBE IN DECEMBER, KISSES ALKAS

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