When I Die

When I Die
The pyre wouldn't burn
But the heart
Dreams will arise instead smoke
Desire will burst inlieu of bamboos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 9:14 PM
Excellent write - well done!
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February 12, 2014 at 7:01 AM
interesting, I enjoyed. ..Skat
Panday Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Thank u dear poet skat a
Ivy D Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Monoj, deep ........
Panday Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 11:20 PM
Thank u Sandy Ivyd
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