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When I Die

When I Die
The pyre wouldn't burn
But the heart
Dreams will arise instead smoke
Desire will burst inlieu of bamboos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2014 9:14:00 PM
Excellent write - well done!
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Date: 2/12/2014 7:01:00 AM
interesting, I enjoyed. ..Skat
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Monoj Panday
Date: 2/18/2014 9:39:00 AM
Thank u dear poet skat a
Date: 10/20/2012 4:08:00 PM
Monoj, deep ........
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Monoj Panday
Date: 2/11/2014 11:20:00 PM
Thank u Sandy Ivyd

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