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When I Die

When I die will I have known I took a trip to Dubai? Or when I once sailed along the Caspian Sea Will that time and place remember me? Will I have known I toured the African plain? Or trailed the Black Forest in the rain. Will I remember I smoked ganja with a Rasta man? As we laid bare across the white Caribbean sand. When I die will it matter that I went to Dubai? While my spirit filters through the ages still restless and cold I will hitchhike a Boeing to haunt Abbey Road. Wear the crowns and the jewels that queens once wore and borrow a mink coat for my Paris tour. Will you see my shadow as I drift through the snow? Climbing atop of Mt Kilimanjaro. Oh why, oh why did I go to Dubai? When I visit my grave where my family still mourns Replacing my flowers that have withered and torn. I will ascend Mt Rushmore to sit on George’s face While counting the stars and staring into space Stowaway on the Challenger on its next mission, raising my flag to claim my position. I will return to earth and rest by a tall redwood tree Tired from my journey as I sip hot lemongrass tea I told a lie, I never went to Dubai But I did once love that Caribbean man as we made a print still engraved in the sand. I have been restless in life as I will be death For I want to feel freedom knowing I have little time left. Go easy on me God for you have known my heart I may have not been the best, but I did my part. But doing my part isn't good enough for me Because I live in a world that I’m dying to see.

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Date: 11/16/2022 11:39:00 AM
Great poems, my kind of poetry really, i cant help myself, an in awe of your style...i see a lot of myself in your poems my jaw drops...i struggle with these themes too and i must say you bring it home for me .... great writting nora
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Date: 2/2/2021 1:08:00 PM
I love it, I don’t live to awful far from my Rushmore and I’ve seen the redwoods. I’ve always wanted to go to Dubai to see the abandoned super cars. Thanks for the trip. Great poem!
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Date: 1/19/2020 9:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poetry. Please comment, I would enjoy hearing your thoughts.
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Date: 1/14/2020 11:29:00 AM
I like the intimate feel of this piece.
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Nora Gibson
Date: 1/14/2020 2:39:00 PM
thank you I have read your work and coming from you I am honored.

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