When I Close My Eyes...I See

When I close my eyes… I see us living
In a lovely cottage in front of a lake
Where the trees are perfect
And the views breathtaking
And nature speaks when the winds play

When I close my eyes… I feel the scent
A mixture of pine in the distant woods
And rejoice the pleasure of the solely leisure
Where my poems fly in the air of nature
With a flash of sweet bliss of gratitude

When I close my eyes… I see us running
Through amazing forests in the early morn
And I feel the sun rising calm and peaceful
A perfume of wild flowers dancing blissful
Guiding our path all the way long

When I close my eyes… my dreams  comes real
When we share together our joys and sorrows
In a lovely cottage in front of a lake
Where we smile forever amused as we never
With roses and lilacs whispering in the air
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 4:07 AM
Great romantic, passionate, and fantasy write. Keep the creative pen flowing. If I have not done so welcome to soup..Hope your stay is happy and long..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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April 6, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 3, 2010 at 11:29 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Gloria. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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April 3, 2010 at 11:02 AM
ENJOYED THE WRITE... HAVE A HAPPY EASTER SUNDAY WEEKEND
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