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When I Close My Eyes

Have you ever had a dream where.... It’s the most scariest ever? You’re sweating. Really sweating. Unable to move You cry for help Nothing happens You awake. Relieved! It’s only a dream Or have you ever had a dream where.... It’s the most comforting ever You’re happy. Really happy. Unable to express You tell everyone Everyone is so pleased You awake. Horrified! It’s only a dream....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/23/2009 11:15:00 PM
I like this write and the way it has the opposite outcome at the end of each stanza. Very clever.
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:12:00 AM
Great poem
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:44:00 AM
I like this read very much as it speaks well of dreams and how they truly affect our lives. Very clear and flowicng. Michael
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:13:00 AM
if if only a dream... i will be glad! nice one ~ Arany
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