Vikki Coram Poet I do not know?

When I Close My Eyes

Have you ever had a dream where....
It’s the most scariest ever?
You’re sweating. Really sweating.
Unable to move
You cry for help
Nothing happens
You awake. Relieved!
It’s only a dream

Or have you ever had a dream where....
It’s the most comforting ever
You’re happy. Really happy.
Unable to express
You tell everyone
Everyone is so pleased
You awake. Horrified!
It’s only a dream....

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Belinda Parish February 23, 2009 at 11:15 PM I like this write and the way it has the opposite outcome at the end of each stanza. Very clever.

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery February 10, 2009 at 8:12 AM Great poem

Michael Degenhardt February 10, 2009 at 4:44 AM I like this read very much as it speaks well of dreams and how they truly affect our lives. Very clear and flowicng. Michael

Arany P. February 10, 2009 at 4:13 AM if if only a dream... i will be glad! nice one ~ Arany