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When I Am Depressed

When I am depressed I float in self-pity I roam in fantasy I bask in solitude When I am depressed Thought of God bores me Thought of family irritates me Thought of life bores me When I am depressed Doctors question than test Doctors suggest than prescribe Doctors philosophize than treat When I am depressed Self-confidence eludes me Self-worth evades me Self-criticism controls me When I am depressed I loathe your presence I detest your concern I NEED YOUR LOVE

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/27/2024 2:04:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2016 11:51:00 AM

Akunna, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 3:37:00 PM

Hello Akunna, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing ---skat

Gregory Cox

Date: 1/5/2011 8:37:00 AM

Ah yes the endless test, however when there remember you share a very large space with so many souls. And to your final line..it is mine..so know... I know nobody that I do not give unconditional love

Sheryl Ob'Rien

Date: 12/20/2010 5:18:00 PM

I am new to poetry soup but not to depression,your words have touched me thank you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2010 3:29:00 PM

I hope just a topic and not your life..Depression is a bad bedfellow..Great work..Sara