When Hearts, Are All We See

Dawned the damsel in distress
His raven cries at, her bequest
Sing red robin yes, a love song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Short and beautiful!!
Dylan Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:46 PM
I love love songs. Jeremy... sometimes I think I am the damsel in distress but no one comes..lol love this poem...
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 2:04 PM
Interesting work that you have penned in this one..The raven was not good but Robin would be much better..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
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March 28, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Hi Jeremy, sounds like her Romeo's sing to a song of rescue. Nice little verse. Charming imagery.... xox~ Linda
Torres Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 3:45 PM
awesome!!! ... i love your masterpiece.. Thanks for the comment on my poem.. ;'))
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