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When Hearts, Are All We See

Dawned the damsel in distress His raven cries at, her bequest Sing red robin yes, a love song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/5/2014 3:38:00 PM
Short and beautiful!!
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Date: 4/29/2014 8:46:00 PM
I love love songs. Jeremy... sometimes I think I am the damsel in distress but no one comes..lol love this poem...
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Date: 4/3/2014 2:04:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned in this one..The raven was not good but Robin would be much better..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
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Date: 3/28/2014 6:10:00 PM
Hi Jeremy, sounds like her Romeo's sing to a song of rescue. Nice little verse. Charming imagery.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 3/28/2014 3:45:00 PM
awesome!!! ... i love your masterpiece.. Thanks for the comment on my poem.. ;'))
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