Notes About The Poem

When he closes his eyes

In his little boy’s dreams
Tall sandcastles guarded by dragons
He’s the bravest of knights



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:45 PM
I've never grown up, still have those daydream's lol. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:09 AM
And that's exactly why we love you, Tom.
Kiser Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Now that takes me back to my childhood; oh how I loved the beach. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:09 AM
Thanks for your beautiful visit and comment, ML.
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