When God Made a Woman

When God Made a Woman                   
~*~
Steve L. Siegel
November 20, 2014
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To my loving wife Sally Ann
 When God made a woman 
                        
I am so thankful that when God made a woman,
From Adam's ribs that before He made her
That He also added a bit firefly spirit, a touch of
unfiltered love that goes right to the man's heart. 
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That He also had time add that composure,
Made her little stubborn at times;
That to make us men behave, so badly,
 That she'd get what she wanted in the first place.
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However, He also added a soft spot in her,
Her heart always had room for her children,
Yet there is just enough room for her man,
She would show him her passion from deep within.
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But, don't let another feline try getting near her man,
Her claws would come out, taking on any who wanted hers;
God must by accident took some man's backbone to put in her,
Because once she is in love, she'll try anything to keep him, 
Fully to her alone; so there's no looking back.
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Yep, I am glad and thankful to my Lord
That He chose to use a part of me to make a woman,
And that He lead her to where I was,
That between the two of them I now have this grand wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/22/2014 2:49:00 AM
Very nice Steven. A woman who inspires this poem must be a woman who has proven true to her creator's design, indeed. congratulations on finding her, and your muse as well. Kim Patrice :)
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Date: 11/21/2014 7:42:00 PM
Her heart always had room fro her children.....a truth of motherhood that I enjoyed of this poem.Well done.Thanks for sharing.Regards. -Safa
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