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When God Created Heaven

( WHEN GOD CREATED HEAVEN ) When God created heaven, and he placed those stars above. I knew right then the star I'd choose, would fill my life with love. The greatest gift bestowed to me, is the best recieved by far. Cuz that's the day I met you Babe, and realized that you're my star. Now I've never been a prayin' man, for religion I seldom sought. But I'll give God thanks and say "Amen" for the gift of love I got. I can't forecast what life will hold, but there is one thing I know. That if we keep it watered well, our plant of love will grow. You will always be the brightest star, in the heavens of my heart. And I won't despair when dark clouds near, for my star shines through the dark.

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Date: 11/7/2014 6:12:00 AM
Love is a gift from God to us. Sadly too many people don't use it right. This is a very nice romantic poem jasmine. A 7 from me. I enjoyed it! :) love and hugs! xxxx D
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/7/2014 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Dorian. your kind words did me justice. thanks for stopping by

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