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When Friends Can'T Touch

In my youth, we played games outside like hide-and-seek and tag; you're it. No one wanted to stay inside, active, we had no time to sit; we fought in fields, with swords and shields. Today, everything is cockeyed, and I'm not liking it a bit. Computers connect kids worldwide, but those friendships are counterfeit. You lose so much; when friends can’t touch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/26/2021 10:15:00 AM
So true, my friend. An interesting format that lent itself well to your thoughts. Good writing.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2021 12:24:00 PM
Thanks Milt, as always your comments help to brighten my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/26/2021 8:21:00 AM
An excellent write, Emile, and so true! It saddens me to think of all the kids who have missed out on so much fun. They don't even know what they are missing. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/26/2021 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Kim, as always , I appreciate all your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/26/2021 8:12:00 AM
So true and I love the form. Wonderful thoughts. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2021 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Regina, as always , I appreciate your friendly comments my friend, Emile.

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