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When Forces Collide

an enigma of adulation captured before release dressed down desert sand paraded, in once forgotten land makeup off of the monkey and rising moonbeams put aside eyes daring, dying only to see out past the distance where the water runs so free I can taste her in the salt-tease drying out for me promises, no promises ponderance where one gazes a pill of "what's it gonna be" a lifetime of surrender where desert never meets the sea or a morning blowing in amid songs of the red dawn riding an endless soothing breeze

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Jenna Logan

Date: 7/5/2020 6:02:00 AM

Hello TS. "a lifetime of surrender where desert never meets the sea" That's poetry meant for pensive thought.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/11/2020 9:18:00 AM

You're very welcome, TS. You're a lot gentler with your response. lol

Ts Poetry
Date: 7/9/2020 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Jenna

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/3/2020 2:20:00 PM

reminds me of a song, The Great Escape.... got to make the most of the Time. just m.h.o., for what it's worth.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/12/2020 6:36:00 PM

mmm, forces kind of collided. :)

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/12/2020 5:39:00 AM

lol

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/11/2020 9:17:00 AM

Certainly NOT referencing the misguided belief of a second coming. My thoughts on the relevance of "someday' is that although not naïve enough to think it can ever be reached, it's a vision that keeps dreams alive. You said 'love and peace,' so I'll say "out"

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/10/2020 3:59:00 PM

GOODLUCK WITH THAT ONE SISTER.;)..."Now" is the time, for many things in this life. Not tomorrow. If 2020 has taught a person anything, that is the most fundamental. If you are talking about the 2nd Coming, that is "Someday", that is tomorrow - people say that is worth looking forward to, there is some "HOPE" for you, for "Someday". But "Now" is the time to make @#$# happen. Love and Peace and all that shizz.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/10/2020 8:58:00 AM

But Someday is the one we will always look forward to.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/10/2020 4:05:00 AM

Is it? That's what most people think, until it's too late. Good luck with that one. Time is on no one's side. There are seven days in the week and Someday isn't one of them. x

Ts Poetry
Date: 7/9/2020 10:52:00 AM

Time is on my side

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/3/2020 2:20:00 PM

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