Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

When Drifting Zyphyr Touches

sister roses bunch 
                                      soaked with winter's silver mists
                                              body perfume wafts

                                               nudges each other
                                       when drifting zephyr touches
                                             nod with jaunty smile

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Skat A May 12, 2015 at 1:12 PM BL..... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT Bl Devnath May 12, 2015 at 1:56 PM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Casarah Nance April 30, 2015 at 2:07 PM Nicely done. The scent of your words perfume the pages. Bl Devnath April 30, 2015 at 2:13 PM Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem. Loved always,bl

Kp Nunez April 30, 2015 at 10:13 AM Great imagery, for your 'ku, BL. Hope you and your are okay, what with the Nepal earthquake. Hugs! :) Kim Bl Devnath April 30, 2015 at 11:36 AM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your appreciation and credit. Till now everything is okay here. But tension is there in mind. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2015 at 7:54 AM - A beautiful haiku, dear Bl - Take care of yourself, your family and friends - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath April 30, 2015 at 11:39 AM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your appreciation. I prayed to God to save us all. Also thanks for asking me to take care of myself, family and friends. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison April 29, 2015 at 7:35 PM beautiful imagery BL:-) hugs jan xx Bl Devnath April 29, 2015 at 7:38 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl