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When Drifting Zyphyr Touches

sister roses bunch soaked with winter's silver mists body perfume wafts nudges each other when drifting zephyr touches nod with jaunty smile

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:12:00 PM

BL..... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/12/2015 1:56:00 PM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/30/2015 2:07:00 PM

Nicely done. The scent of your words perfume the pages.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/30/2015 2:13:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem. Loved always,bl

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/30/2015 10:13:00 AM

Great imagery, for your 'ku, BL. Hope you and your are okay, what with the Nepal earthquake. Hugs! :) Kim

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/30/2015 11:36:00 AM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your appreciation and credit. Till now everything is okay here. But tension is there in mind. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2015 7:54:00 AM

- A beautiful haiku, dear Bl - Take care of yourself, your family and friends - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/30/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your appreciation. I prayed to God to save us all. Also thanks for asking me to take care of myself, family and friends. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2015 7:35:00 PM

beautiful imagery BL:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/29/2015 7:38:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl