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When Dreams Riot

a mass rebellion against fears of yesterday hardcore promotion of dreams that wouldn't stay a riotous screaming protesting my doubts once again I'm dreaming and following the shouts of the crowd in my mind the audiences in my heart reminding me of the plan I designed and begging me to start resurrecting my passion demanding the fulfillment of desires urging me to no longer ration the embers of old fires instead encourage their burning until they become a blaze finally act on my yearning and break out of this daze

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Date: 1/25/2017 6:38:00 PM
A passionate piece Christy. I enjoyed your poem as it reminds me of the quote 'to thine own self be true' 7 ;+)
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Date: 1/25/2017 5:07:00 PM
It hard to convince ourselves to leave the safety of the group/crowd and venture out to seek what we really desire. The message in this piece is deep and eye opening and I enjoyed it very much. The first steps are the hardest, but often when not taken we find regret becomes our company. Really cool Christy.
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Date: 1/25/2017 4:53:00 PM
An epiphany? Beautifully done, Christy:) Some very memorable lines.
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Date: 1/25/2017 4:45:00 PM
Vivid emotions! Nicely done, Christy!
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