When Dark Meets Light In a Bright Or Dim Place

i love the shadows my mind and its perspective the human knot 3/24/2023 Inspired by Dilly Dally’s long title senryu ;)

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Sotto Poet

Date: 3/25/2023 2:33:00 PM

Outstanding work, Kim, and my warmest wishes.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2023 5:49:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/24/2023 7:11:00 PM

Ah. Nice tip of the cap, Kim. never heard of a human knot except maybe yoga?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 8:42:00 PM

human knot is a game: This challenge involves team members forming a circle, grabbing random teammates’ hands, and untangling themselves without breaking their hold

Joseph May

Date: 3/24/2023 6:02:00 PM

Very nicely done Kim, best wishes

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 8:42:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2023 1:58:00 PM

- Great one, Kim ... feel the title says more than the poem :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 2:38:00 PM

Either way :) So a human knot is a game: This challenge involves team members forming a circle, grabbing random teammates’ hands, and untangling themselves without breaking their hold.