When Dark Meets Light In a Bright Or Dim Place

i love the shadows my mind and its perspective the human knot 3/24/2023
Inspired by Dilly Dally’s long title senryu ;)
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March 25, 2023 at 2:33 PM
Outstanding work, Kim, and my warmest wishes.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Turner Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Ah. Nice tip of the cap, Kim. never heard of a human knot except maybe yoga?
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 8:42 PM
human knot is a game: This challenge involves team members forming a circle, grabbing random teammates’ hands, and untangling themselves without breaking their hold
May Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Very nicely done Kim, best wishes
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 1:58 PM
- Great one, Kim ... feel the title says more than the poem :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Either way :) So a human knot is a game: This challenge involves team members forming a circle, grabbing random teammates’ hands, and untangling themselves without breaking their hold.
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