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When Close Friends Take Ill

When close friends take ill It is a real "bummer" The next worse thing to taking ill yourself When close friends near death It can really blow your mind Turn on your love light before it is too late! For we are only granted a few moments in which to enjoy the sun - the ocean - the countryside the metropolis So avoid hate and take a deep breath For whatever path you choose I wish that The force be with you! So you can endure the loss of close friends And continue onward on the difficult road of life!

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 9/13/2023 10:07:00 PM

OH MY! Do I understand he just died? I am so sorry, just reading other comments. PS friends, so sorry for this loss of a fellow poet, if he did pass.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 9/13/2023 10:02:00 PM

"When close friends are near death." Wow just happened on you, and read this. Dear friend of over 45 yrs, just told in Hospic, days very short. Very nice poem. Enjoyed very much and so true.

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 2/14/2023 12:17:00 PM

Hello Old Friend This piece was nicely and straight to the point! hope life has been treating you well -Best Wishes

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/30/2021 3:26:00 PM

Matthew this is so poignant I will miss your Soup comments, I never saw you face to face Now; I will miss your humanity in this place.' Thank you for your words of encouragement Dear friend thank you for your worthy poems.'

Daniel Schack

Date: 6/13/2021 1:22:00 PM

Love this poem. Miss you much great pal.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2020 5:08:00 PM

OMG, he has passed away??? I can't believe I never heard this yet!!! I am so sorry, Matt, to not have known or have said anything. My goodness, you are at last in paradise, friend.

Linda Suchy

Date: 3/22/2020 5:45:00 AM

Matthew - RIP my poet friend - I just learned of your passing. Voices Israel Group of Poets in English will miss your charming poems. I will miss our emails about life. If only I had known you were ill, I would have sent you virtual cards! Your memory will be a blessing. Linda Suchy Secretary Voices Israel secretary.voices@gmail.com

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/26/2020 7:27:00 AM

Very hard to watch loved one, friends and family near death, we think we will never ever be normal again, the memory remains for ever, the pain lingers, but life goes on. A beautiful write and a fav. for me Mathew. Blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2020 5:25:00 AM

Matthew, Sorry to hear that you have had someone close to you become ill. There has been some really sick people this fall and winter here in our hometown. A large number have become so ill that they had to go to the hospital. As we get older more people our age get ill and some pass which can diminish our social network. My parents lived into their late nineties but they continued to make friends with younger people and that helped. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2020 2:22:00 PM

as Teppo said, this is a very important message. It's horrible to see them in such bad shape and we can do nothing but lend a listening ear or shoulder to lean on.