When Close Friends Take Ill

When close friends take ill 
It is a real "bummer"
The next worse thing to taking ill yourself
When close friends near death 
It can really blow your mind
Turn on your love light before it is too late! 
For we are only granted a few moments
in which to enjoy the sun - the ocean - the countryside 
the metropolis
So avoid hate and take a deep breath 
For whatever path you choose I wish that 
The force be with you!
So you can endure the loss of close friends 
And continue onward 
on the difficult road of life!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 4:46 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 10:07 PM
OH MY! Do I understand he just died? I am so sorry, just reading other comments. PS friends, so sorry for this loss of a fellow poet, if he did pass.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 10:02 PM
"When close friends are near death." Wow just happened on you, and read this. Dear friend of over 45 yrs, just told in Hospic, days very short. Very nice poem. Enjoyed very much and so true.
Christian-Bowling Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Hello Old Friend This piece was nicely and straight to the point! hope life has been treating you well -Best Wishes
Maverick Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Matthew this is so poignant I will miss your Soup comments, I never saw you face to face Now; I will miss your humanity in this place.' Thank you for your words of encouragement Dear friend thank you for your worthy poems.'
Schack Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Love this poem. Miss you much great pal.
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 5:08 PM
OMG, he has passed away??? I can't believe I never heard this yet!!! I am so sorry, Matt, to not have known or have said anything. My goodness, you are at last in paradise, friend.
Suchy Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Matthew - RIP my poet friend - I just learned of your passing. Voices Israel Group of Poets in English will miss your charming poems. I will miss our emails about life. If only I had known you were ill, I would have sent you virtual cards! Your memory will be a blessing. Linda Suchy Secretary Voices Israel [email protected]
Proxenos Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Very hard to watch loved one, friends and family near death, we think we will never ever be normal again, the memory remains for ever, the pain lingers, but life goes on. A beautiful write and a fav. for me Mathew. Blessings, Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 5:25 AM
Matthew, Sorry to hear that you have had someone close to you become ill. There has been some really sick people this fall and winter here in our hometown. A large number have become so ill that they had to go to the hospital. As we get older more people our age get ill and some pass which can diminish our social network. My parents lived into their late nineties but they continued to make friends with younger people and that helped. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:22 PM
as Teppo said, this is a very important message. It's horrible to see them in such bad shape and we can do nothing but lend a listening ear or shoulder to lean on.
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