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When All Is New

Water that is clear, cool Bouncing over rocky creek bed Flowing through rocky cleft Looks like Palomino's tail One that is being swished Blown in a gentle breeze On a spring morn when all is new

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Kim Hilliker

Date: 8/14/2010 10:55:00 AM

I feel refreshed! Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/13/2010 2:50:00 PM

the imagery is like a ride. i hope your day is a breeze, Sara. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Ryan Emerald

Date: 8/10/2010 4:22:00 PM

love the images this creates...makes me forgot everything and be at peace for a moment

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/10/2010 4:07:00 AM

A lovely refreshing image, I'm tempted to dip my toes in that water, it reminds me of a haiku I wrote a while back. I may dig it out and post it here. Enjoyed your write Sara. Thanks for all your comments ~ Sharon :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/9/2010 3:01:00 PM

Close my eyes and I hear the water bouncing.. Great picture in my mind you paint.. That is pure talent to do that... always Michael

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/8/2010 7:29:00 PM

that mole pregnancy is a hydatiform mole-I am probably not spellig it right.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/8/2010 6:20:00 PM

pretty--

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/8/2010 12:25:00 PM

Sara, such a stunning picture you've painted with your words.. Thank you for reading my predicament :) Wilma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/8/2010 5:56:00 AM

What do you want to know about the Summertime contest? It's not strict! LOl listen to one of the songs (I've posted links) and any thing you think of playing slightly off that song write a poem. Say Running Bear...you could do a limerick about running naked? or a poem about a Bear or a Romeo & Juliet poem..all would be fine or just a verse with a NAmerican theme! Just pick one and sign up on the bottom of one of my sestina's ;) Loves Ya