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When a Tear Falls

When a tear falls who knows the pain behind it who knows the emptiness one feels When a tear falls one feels alone in a world that is hurtful and cold When a tear falls who knows how you feel who knows the emotions inside seeing a friend that is broken in need of a shoulder When a tear falls where is a true friend one to hear the sorrows of your soul seeking to heal your wounds When a tear falls where are you where are you

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Date: 6/29/2010 1:25:00 AM
Hi Donny--this is really moving and it touches on so much as well--I really liked how you put it, "when a tear falls"--hopefully that there is someone out there to catch those falling tears...thanks for sharing--nikko :)
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Date: 6/28/2010 7:22:00 PM
A lot of truth in your poem, Donny. If we could only be there when we don't see THE TEAR FALL. Keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile
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