When

Please tell me WHEN
                           When you will be THERE
                   When you need is all there IS
              When will your answer not be NO
                  When we can start having FUN
     When you'll open up and let my love IN
             When you’ll let me feel your LOVE
                        When will you tell me WHY
               Tell me what you need me to DO
                    Please tell me how to do it IT


By Robb A. Kopp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 18, 2010 at 8:42 AM
I have spent countless hours secluded, unsure, and depressed over lost love..... Then I met Consuelo'!!!!... Good work my friend....:JP]
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February 18, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Sad but beautiful expression of your desire to be loved, Robb. We all feel this way sometimes; I hope it works out for you. Nothing hurts as much as rejection by someone we hold dear. Love, Carolyn
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